Kia ora, I'm Delilah from Yaldhurst Model School and I am a year five. I liked the way you have showed the phases of the moon in pictures and words. You brought me back to when my class was doing matariki tree planting, but sadly I wasn't there because I was in the sick bay. To improve, you could add more colours to both your background and writing. Sometimes even a change of font can make things turn around.keep the great work up.
Kia ora, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you have showed the phases of the moon in pictures and words.
You brought me back to when my class was doing matariki tree planting, but sadly I wasn't there because I was in the sick bay.
To improve, you could add more colours to both your background and writing. Sometimes even a change of font can make things turn around.
How does the sun reflect light on the moon?
Bye!
-Amelia
ia ora, I'm Delilah from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you have showed the phases of the moon in pictures and words.
You brought me back to when my class was doing matariki tree planting, but sadly I wasn't there because I was in the sick bay.
To improve, you could add more colours to both your background and writing. Sometimes even a change of font can make things turn around.
How does the sun reflect light on the moon?
Bye!
-Delilah
Kia ora, Javana.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have explained the moon I like the moon because I don't like light at night.
Do you like the moon?
Did you think that the class like's the moon?
Or was it for class I wonder
Kia ora, I'm Delilah from Yaldhurst Model School and I am a year five.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you have showed the phases of the moon in pictures and words.
You brought me back to when my class was doing matariki tree planting, but sadly I wasn't there because I was in the sick bay.
To improve, you could add more colours to both your background and writing. Sometimes even a change of font can make things turn around.keep the great work up.
kind regards
Delilah (: