Kia ora Javana, I was very impressed with your moon mahi. You answered the questions you researched thoroughly. I like the way you supported your learning with pictures as I was able to look at the image to understand your writing. I like the moon especially when it is a full moon. Keep up the good work!
Kia ora, I'm Delilah from Yaldhurst Model School and I am a year five. I liked the way you have showed the phases of the moon in pictures and words. You brought me back to when my class was doing matariki tree planting, but sadly I wasn't there because I was in the sick bay. To improve, you could add more colours to both your background and writing. Sometimes even a change of font can make things turn around.keep the great work up.
Kia ora, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you have showed the phases of the moon in pictures and words.
You brought me back to when my class was doing matariki tree planting, but sadly I wasn't there because I was in the sick bay.
To improve, you could add more colours to both your background and writing. Sometimes even a change of font can make things turn around.
How does the sun reflect light on the moon?
Bye!
-Amelia
ia ora, I'm Delilah from Yaldhurst Model School.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you have showed the phases of the moon in pictures and words.
You brought me back to when my class was doing matariki tree planting, but sadly I wasn't there because I was in the sick bay.
To improve, you could add more colours to both your background and writing. Sometimes even a change of font can make things turn around.
How does the sun reflect light on the moon?
Bye!
-Delilah
Kia ora, Javana.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you have explained the moon I like the moon because I don't like light at night.
Do you like the moon?
Did you think that the class like's the moon?
Or was it for class I wonder
Hi Ethan I don't really now if my class likes the moon we just did phase for Matariki it was really fun.
Deletebye
-Javana
Kia ora Javana,
ReplyDeleteI was very impressed with your moon mahi. You answered the questions you researched thoroughly. I like the way you supported your learning with pictures as I was able to look at the image to understand your writing. I like the moon especially when it is a full moon. Keep up the good work!
Kia ora, I'm Delilah from Yaldhurst Model School and I am a year five.
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you have showed the phases of the moon in pictures and words.
You brought me back to when my class was doing matariki tree planting, but sadly I wasn't there because I was in the sick bay.
To improve, you could add more colours to both your background and writing. Sometimes even a change of font can make things turn around.keep the great work up.
kind regards
Delilah (: